Saturday, January 22, 2011

Amidst Dead Silence...!!!

Eyes don't like to blink..
Breathing seems a burden..
Heart beats as if uncalled for..
Soul thrives to get lost...

All were once beyond my attention;
Naturally, never need any permission.
All seem cruelly paining nowadays;
Appear to me a needless taste.

Roses don't attract me to it anymore;
Mild breeze breaks my bones;
Rain clots flowing blood;
Nature doesn't enchant my soul these days.

How strange things replaced my joyous life?
What's happening to me nowadays?
Where this hell hide in me all the way?
Can't it be quenched all at once?

But, I was not what I am now..
Truly till just few days ago...
Life had a different tone of love..
With jubilant moments always to have..

Jingling with the chirps of birds,
Mingling with the rays of Sun,
Tumbling into the chilling Moon,
Willing to conquer my own world...!

Who stole my moments without a sign?
Who took my things a light year away? 
How this luxurious hall looks like a poultry farm;
Where I am sickened alone staring the sealing?

Minutes I chased once are rushing me now;
Sleep never hugs me when I wish to;
Once dreams occupied my sleep; 
Now to get asleep itself is a dream...!

Who made me to sway on this edge?
Is it the so called 'Loneliness'?
Amidst dead silence around me..
Mind struggles in a high turbulence...!


  1. fentastic enriched meloncholy poem...Very nice sathish....
    (Any homesick?? )

  2. Thanks Aanandhi..!
    Mmmm...not exactly nostalgic...! But to some extent.

    //சில சமயங்களில் இணையம் என் அரிய,பொக்கிஷ நேரங்களை "கொல்லும்"போது மீண்டும் வணக்கம் சொல்லிட்டு போயிரலாமான்னு தோணிகிட்டே இருக்கு//

    I'm sailing on your same words above...! With a small correction. I feel, for me other things kill my time by not allowing me to pen down more. I love blogging..!

  3. mm sathish...It s depends upon individuals....:((

  4. Yeah..! I now think I may be wrong as Anandhi words are much closer to the truth. These blogs have stolen my invaluable time much.
    Also I'd like to state again that very few have the tendency to turn their thoughts into words without any spillage. You have it, Anandhi.

  5. its nice. almost felt by each individual whoever living in abroad. or else living without a family. is that a effect of loneliness?

  6. Welcome to my blog Rajesh-My friend. You are cent percent right. Certain emotional things one can't overcome even though we boast that we have grown and matured.
    Thanks for you comment. Wish to see you here again.

  7. Cheer up, buddy, "today" comes in your our only once ! Make the most of it !!! Make it a point everyday !

    Best regards

  8. cheer up and look around,world is beautiful and imbibe positivity from chirping of birds and get inspiration from your own lines which are flowing smoothly but sometimes driven by high tides.great going!

  9. //Radhakrishnan said...Make the most of it !!! Make it a point everyday !//

    Welcome to this exclusive comment section, Sir. Thanks for your invaluable motivational comment as usual.

  10. //Pratibha The Talent said...
    cheer up and look around,world is beautiful and imbibe positivity//

    Cheered up, Pratibha...!
    Thanks for your inspirational words which flowed in a poetic way.

  11. Great Job Sathish,
    Cheer up!!

    Abdul Malik Baloch

  12. //Abdul Malik said..
    Great Job Sathish,
    Cheer up!!//

    Thanks for your visit and invaluable comment, Malik.